Idea Change - Interim Crit

This was the best crit i've had throughout the whole project. The feedback i got was that my designs were too clinical and impersonal. People mentioned my audience would be hesitant about approaching my designed products as they looked too technical. After showing my previous inspiration for my initial idea of my book of simplicity quotes, people thought this style of design would suit my audience more as the vintage colours and photos would be from my audiences era and they would feel more comfortable with this style. They also said that they wouldn't be as patronizing as i thought it would be.

I'm quite glad that people thought my designs were too impersonal as i didn't really put myself into my designs because i thought it would make them inappropriate to my audience, so now ive had feedback that my designs are too clinical and impersonal i will incorporate my previous inspirations adapted to my current designs, to create something fun and interesting that will make the golden oldies wanna become silver surfers!