Critical Feedback from Final Crit: (presentation boards)

From my crit, people mentioned that i had too much text on my final presentation boards and in between my fourth and fifth board there was a jump in the story of my project. Also it was mentioned that it would be good for my products to be put into context in a photo or shown in a photo studio setting. The hierarchy of the images i used was also questioned, as some images of others work or references were larger than my own, drawing attention away from my work. I will need to work on the hierarchy of my imagery and I will change my boards according to criticism received.